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All this information at our fingertips
Yet we choose to look at cats?
Freedom to voice our every thought
A privilege left unchecked
A steaming pit of tricks and trolls
Accessories now abused

Drowning in the vanity
And self obsessed depravity
Our lives uploaded; digitalised
Essence poured upon the screen

Entitled to an opinion
Set up for a response
Like throwing a lump of meat
To a pack of wild dogs

“Ten years ago, these people would not be allowed crayons,
Let alone use of the internet”
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AudeS Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Thanks to the internet, I know a lot about Greek, Norse, Japanese and werewolf-related (and I kinda guess I know more than the average person about that) mythology. And also the weaknesses of all my classmates, except for those, who are intelligent enough to not put everything on their facebook-page. So, basically I use my internet to get informations.
I also put my opinion on some places, if the risk that people can't understand my point is low.... so basically never. Seriously, the internet is the reason, why I think that Johnathan Swift is right about humans seldom using their god damn reason (the prove can be found in any comment section across the internet). Reason enables us to think about something and come to a conclusion... the internet pretty much shows that many people are fixed with one point of view and they will never accept any argument, no matter how strong it is, which goes against their point of view.
It's just weird.
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CKL-A Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow! I really really like this! It makes a lot of sense but still has enough ambiguity which allows for personal exploration of the words you have used. AWESOME! ^^
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ADistortedUtopia Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow, thanks for the in depth feedback XD
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CKL-A Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! Ah, would you mind taking a quick look at my work? I'm new here and I'd really appreciate some feedback on how to improve! xD thanks in advance!
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
So true. So very, very true! :D I like the subject you have chosen, and I agree with you on many levels :D The message of it is clear, and it has an easy flow of words. Very nice work ^^
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ADistortedUtopia Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks very much :)
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
You're very welcome :)
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