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Delving into the origins
Of what makes an individual
Who are you? Who am I?
There’s a lack of understanding,
Yet we jump to judge
And claim to know
That which we could never understand

Attempts are seldom made
To investigate the unknown
To strive to discover
Those we claim to know
From the inside out
Extract the innermost thoughts

In place there is an idealist mirage
To which our beliefs shall cling to
In desperation, or disbelief

It’s the construct of our mindset
That leads us all astray
In essence, this is a short piece about people, and our lack of understanding of each other.
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Jeans99 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
I loves your poems :3 Reading this has given me a couple of ideas, so thank you! People's understanding of one another is always an interesting topic...
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ADistortedUtopia Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much XD
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Ike9899 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student General Artist
That sums it up about right xD good work!!
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ADistortedUtopia Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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